Teens+X+-+Silvia+López+-+Writing

=Silvia López - Writing - Teens X = = = 

**Task N° 1: Article** Allow me a space in our school magazine to give my opinion about the person who I want to come to give a speech and I hope all collegues will accept my opinion or let me say my suggestion.

According to my suggestion I had admire D.J Solo to come and give the speech due to his hard work, good English or let me say his vocublary. I know for sure that he is famous in this town and everybody know him also. Even most of us we do not know his appearance, we have heard him in our radio. Giving speech to any ceremony where we have nominated to do so. Finally he didn’t worry about nonsense thing and he is not selfish person. Even he give a speech for the long time he can’t ask much money for that and in that way we safe also our school money, so that it will used for other thing in diary life.

**Teacher's feedback:**  You've made an effort to write your article, Silvia, I appreciate that. However, there are some things to improve as regards **language** and **content**. Why don't we talk about your article in class?

(Silvia's article has many errors, and it'll be exhausting to mark them all and give appropriate feedback. So you could talk to your student in class. Silvia will then write a **second draft**, and she should also read her classmates' tasks as well. This will help her improve her own article).