Teens+X+-+María+González+-+Writing

=María González - Writing - Teens X = = = 

**Task N° 1: Article**

**“Do you want to meet an Angel?”** By María González

As you all know, our school is planning to invite a famous person to give a speech at our prize day. Being the captain of the school, I would like to put forward my suggestion for the person whom I would like to invite.

The person whom I would like to invite is a great personality and everyone has a lot of respect for him in their hearts. Not only is he outstanding in his profession, but also he has contributed a lot towards the society. He has also recently received the Personality of the Year award and he is, Martin Rodriguez.

The thing which I admire about him is his devotion and hard work for his country and our neighbour country. It was he who first came forward to help the earthquake victims in Chile. He worked all day and night to raise funds for the earthquake victims and was able to collect 1.5 million pesos.

I think everyone should appreciate his generosity and approve my choice. His speech will teach the student how to achieve their goals. Also, we can learn something from this great person which will prove helpful for all our life. He can arise in our hearts the spirit, that with our will and power, nothing is impossible!

**Teacher's feedback:**  Excellent article, María! It's very well-organised and extremely interesting to read. You've used complex structures and vocabulary. There are no language errors, except for a missing preposition on line 9. (Etc.)

(María needn't write a second draft, but she could comment on her classmates' articles by writing a short comment either **after** the task or in the **discussion tab** above).